In 1995, Graham Nelson (in his short book The Craft of Adventure) wrote A Player’s Bill of Rights for interactive fiction. In the name of…
In 1995, Graham Nelson (in his short book The Craft of Adventure) wrote A Player’s Bill of Rights for interactive fiction. In the name of encouraging the kind of theoretical understanding around visual novels & the norms and expectations around them that the interactive fiction community has enjoyed for three decades, and with the understanding that visual novels have drastically different tendencies, tropes, and tics, I would like (with apologies to Nelson) to present an alternative list.
Unexpected death or dead-ends must always provide new information
Where players of both parser-IF and point and click adventures are focused on
solving puzzles (i.e., their goal is to win the game), players of visual
novels are focused on understanding the characters and world. To that end,
visual novels have enhanced technical facilities to make save-scumming and
back-tracking easier (such as multiple save slots & the ability to fast-
forward through or skip already-seen segments), meaning that unexpected deaths
are completely acceptable. However, the extra effort necessitated by
unexpected deaths or dead-ends, while minimized, is still non-zero, so every
death must have a reward (in the sense that it provides a clue for some future
play-through).
When choices have locked the player into a particular route, this must be telegraphed
It is normal (for logistical & technical reasons) for VNs to lock players into
a particular route or arc, often based on flags set earlier. In other words,
VN stories are tree-shaped. It’s good practice to provide a non-interactive
transition between an introductory or prologue section shared between routes &
the second portion of the game, where routes are completely separate — and
it’s good practice to indicate which route you are playing during that
transition. If routes overlap substantially, then such a transition is not
necessary.
Other routes, past lives, and ‘future events’, to the extent that they are accessible in multiple play-throughs, should add to the experience
VN players, because they play for the sake of learning about the characters
and world rather than getting some arbitrary ‘good end’, tend to be
completionists — playing through to at least the ‘good end’ of every route,
and often trying to view every single scene. The game should reward this
behavior, because games that do not reward it will be seen as dull by the
player base (who will play to completion anyway). While easter eggs are fine,
the best way to reward player effort is to make it so that each route one
plays through adds depth to the other routes (with a new perspective available
to someone who has played through all the routes). Often, a hidden ‘true end’
route is unlocked only when the player has played through every other route
(and in dating sims, this is often the ‘harem route’), and such a route is
most satisfying when it reframes the other routes.
Only narratively-meaningful interactivity should be provided
Unlike most IF, the VN form has extremely coarse-grained interactivity. Used
properly, this is an advantage, because it means that VNs are much more
‘story-like’ than ‘game-like’ . Because interactivity is available, it’s
tempting for developers to create minigames or joke interactions. However,
such interactions tend to come off as cheap, unnecessary, and distracting. If
interactivity is provided, every option should either progress the narrative
or provide meaningful characterization. Minigames almost never do either of
these things, and so they should generally be avoided.
Any extended period of non-interactivity should function as a story
Because of the coarse granularity of interactivity in VNs, there are often
long periods during which players make no choices. (Kinetic novels are
entirely non-interactive.) People who think of VNs primarily as games will
sometimes write these sections without making them narratively compelling, &
sections written this way are a slog. Never write a non-interactive section of
a VN that, were it a movie with exactly the same dialogue and events, you
would not watch. VNs need to succeed as screenplays, movies, and games,
while also being (generally) many times longer. This means that all of the
normal tricks regarding exposition and pacing need to be applied.
Character should always be emphasized
VNs are bought and sold on character appeal. They are marketed on the shallow
appeal of character designs & stock types, & their payload is in character
development. VN fandom is built on the personal attachment players get from
spending tens of hours interacting with particular characters & getting to
know them. In other words, if your major characters do not have hidden depth,
you are scamming your players. To the extent that throwaway or gimmick
characters exist, they must justify their existence by being entertaining.
Plot does not need to be compelling, if the characters are sufficiently
charismatic (as any popular dating sim shows).
Where the basic operation in IF is movement, the basic operation in a VN is
speech. Where the skeleton of an IF game is a map, the skeleton of a VN is a
dialogue tree. This should tell you how important character is in VNs.
Reward dedication and effort
The VN medium is a medium for completionists. Most players will try to see
every single scene. So: make every death unique and satisfying, make running
jokes that get funnier with repetition, give your characters hidden depths
that are only revealed deep in other characters’ routes, make every piece of
throwaway dialogue add to the experience of the world, make full use of
lietmotifs and refrains in your soundtrack, take advantage of intertextuality
— do everything you can to make sure players do not feel like they are wasting
their time, by making sure that looking closer is always rewarded. Players who
play only one route (or do not play a route to completion) are not your core
audience, and while you shouldn’t scare away players early, it is more
important to reward obsession than to cater to casuals.
By John Ohno on August 9, 2019.
[Canonical link](https://medium.com/@enkiv2/a-players-bill-of-rights-for- visual-novels-2ea62d546666)
Exported from Medium on September 18, 2020.
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